Mary, despite being to my memory a relative newcomer to the stage, has always stood out to me as a high quality player.
I’m no counciller so take these bits with a mountain of salt, but here’s my takeaways from what I’ve read
This application is definitely not what we’re accustomed to seeing but that shouldn’t necessarily mean it isn’t taken seriously either, there’s at the very least some good foundations to build on here.
Your personality and “quirk” struck me as a little vague and indiscernable, I liked this comment and this seems unique; though it isn’t immediately apparent to me how it’d fit into a synthetic’s character.
I also really liked your focus on this;
This opinion is echoed by a lot of other synths, and is in my opinion a good mindset to play synth with.
This is also good! A lot of the time securing good roleplay opportunities comes from prodding others and giving them something to work with, rather than just standing around expecting the roleplay to find you.
Again, not a counciller, but my overall feeling is that as a player you’d be an awesome addition to the WL and I’d love to see Holly aboard the Almayer, you have the right mindset, and with the right mindset any other issues are small obstacles to climb.
If you ever wanna nerd out about the Aliens setting I recommend checking out Lou’s lore resources thread– I found that flipping through some of these books got me really immersed in the setting and helped me a lot to really imagine my character in the world-- which also helped me nail down the specifics better.
Even if this one doesn’t make it through, I recommend you revise your app and give it another go, and I give this a strong;