Right, let’s start with the personality; it’s too bland to what we would be looking for in a Synth; the awnser here, is to bare-bones, to a point where while, you’ve communicated the gimmick, you’ve not actually communicated what the synth’s personality is. You’ve fallen for the trap of, describing an interest, but not a personality.
This is used to basically give a run down of what you synth was designed for, what was its main role before being apart of the USCM, What place does your synth have within the universe, was it refurbished, was it recovered, was the synth just bought fresh off the line; you need to use this to either summarize your story, or use it to give further elaboration of the “why”, your synth is apart of the USCM.
While yes, it is the best support role in the game. We don’t want programmers, this answer leaves a bad taste in my mouth, because you see the synth role more towards the mechanics than the actual rp, while yes, you’ve said you enjoy the potential of the rp that synths have – that is fantasy to me. as ‘Potential’ could be fanfiction, and unable to be executed in game.
You need further elaboration here; you’ve got confidence, but confidence means nothing if you do not show it. Bluntly saying I an excellent medic, while not giving examples of how you’d handle bodes, or surgery is not going to cut it. Likewise, show yourself off more, tell me, and elaborate on how you tick, how you think, I want to see your mindset when handling problems.
This is fine, and satisfactory; but I’d like to see more of the niche scenarios that a synth can find itself in.
As for your story, what I see is basically what I get; it’s not really a character, but someone with an interest – which is fine, but i’d like to point to your username and the name of your synth; while not against the rules, it does feel self-inset. And the story reflects the kind of personality of this self-inset type of tone, your story does not reflect a personality that would be fleshed out enough to be up to my standards.