EmeraldCandy - Yautja Application

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Yautja Application - EmeraldCandy

What’s your BYOND key?

EmeraldCandy

What’s your Discord ID?

EmeraldCandy

Do you have a regular character? If so - what’s their name?

Kyani Levidensis / Joyce / KYA

What are your playtimes?

(see below)

Yautja Info:

What’s the name of your Yautja?

Tah’Zul

What clan are you joining?

Cnaw

If minor: Give your clan lore.

Yautja Character Story:

A group of Marines suddenly rush up and start shooting you. How do you respond?

I believe the reaction would be highly situational to the context. If I was cloaked, and not engaged with a fight, I would likely just disengage since invisible things arequite worrying for marines! Lurkers are a constant threat after all. If I was hunting/fighting and interrupted, I may attempt to simply continue the fight if possible. But if overwhelmed, maybe stunning them, grabbing my target and relocating with a roar. Perhaps also simply disengaging and attempt to hunt later. It depends!

Another Yautja hunted and killed a target you had marked. What do you do?

There would be an immediate confrontation, preferably in person, but called out over comms if unable. A stealing a claimed prey to Tah’Zul is akin to stealing one’s honor. They would demand their reason, and would be quite aggressive with their questioning. If the other was apologetic, and made promises to not continue the behavior, or that it was a genuine mistake, they could be forgiven. However, in most other reactions it would be likely to lead to an honor duel.

Do you have anything else you would like to include about your application?

Thanks to treedog for giving the story its first lookover, and to QuadDevil for getting me interested in preds in the first place and encouraging the initial synth application as well.

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Story:
The length likely strikes fear into the heart of some, as it is indeed quite long. Sentence structure isn’t perfect and there are a lot of repeat words, phrases, and well, ‘structure’ in general. Certainly more revising would have shaped a more refined piece.

…However, the characters, plot, story arc for Tah’Zul and the revealing betrayal of his kin were very encapsulating and excellent work. I was fully immersed in the story early on and was not disappointed with the end result. In my opinion, one of the best whitelist stories that I have read in quite a while, as it not only veers away from common tropes that others have explored but also shows an understanding of Yautja culture that even a non-Aliens fan could comprehend. I’m a fan.

Player:
I’ve seen you roleplay as Joyce, and as you’ve shaped and developed the character, I’m quite confident you have the ability to meet expectations for the Predator whitelist. I’m curious to see how you fare with the role.

So, quite easily, +1. I wish you luck!

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Joyce is one of the 4 synths I believe has a good character.
Story was a little hard to read but I enjoyed it.
they are a long-time Cm13 nerd +1 from me

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I do not remember seeing your marine character but i have seen Joyce, stays in character, good rp, enjoyable to be around +1 from me.

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