Hi Isaac and thank you for your interest in the Synthetic Whitelist.
We felt that the first part of quirk was a bit too convoluted for regular gameplay - ie you would not be able to apply it in most scenarios. It would be fantastic if you could be stuck in research but chances are as a Shipside Synthetic you will have a plethora of more important things to do. Instead, you can opt for keeping this as part of your future personality but having something stronger in its place that you could apply round to round. While roleplay is vital, something as dialogue based as yours which would take 10, 15, 30 seconds to type out may be too sluggish for both you and other players.
We felt your story could be stronger, there were also some weird holes in the plot where it’s unknown how Kai was found - yet they found him on a ship. Kai states he’s on a ship but doesn’t state which ship - it would likely be plausible that the team that recovered Kai in the first place would know at least where they found him from. I think that your RP of being overanalytical here was conducted in a unique and interesting manner, but I still probably would not recommend it to be the base of your Synthetic’s personality just because it’s difficult to pull off in the fast nature of situations sometimes.
I like your reason for wanting to be a Synthetic! It is great to hear about your passion here.
In the future I would like you to state actual scenarios for your combat answer, ie “If a runner were to approach a downed marine and I was nearby…” etc.
Your experience answers were OK but you should definitely elaborate more if possible. In addition, frontline triage and combat surgery are key aspects of what Synthetics are known for. There is no higher skill when it comes to medical assistance, so make sure you are well knowledged and well experienced in this regard!
Overall, perhaps the biggest hurdle in your application here was the lack of support and vouches. It would be fruitful if you play more Corpsman, field surgeon etc to get known out there. Since you enjoy RP a lot, it should help you create a memorable character that people like, especially since you’d be in medical positions. During our observation period we were unable to find you playing human support roles.
The application is unfortunately denied but you may reapply in 23 days due to voting dilation(10/11/23). Before you do that I highly recommend you get some more experience in those support roles! Best of luck 