Monolamp63 - Yautja Application

Yautja Application - Monolamp63

What’s your BYOND key?

Monolamp63

What’s your Discord ID?

Yes_man0469

Do you have a regular character? If so - what’s their name?

Albert Walderson,Jake ‘Snake’ Walker, Xeno: ML

Yautja Info:

What’s the name of your Yautja?

Tha-Zu’Ri

What clan are you joining?

Cnãw

If minor: Give your clan lore.

Yautja Character Story:

A group of Marines suddenly rush up and start shooting you. How do you respond?

It would all depend on context. Did I meet them? Was I fighting another Marine, and they joined in? I would respond by cloacking and observing them to see if they plan to kill me or not.

Another Yautja hunted and killed a target you had marked. What do you do?

I would ask them to explain why they killed my marked target if they didn’t have a good reason, I would challenge them to an honor duel. If they do, I would tell them not to do it again.

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and my hours.

Hello. I’ve had two interactions with you so far.

The first one was positive. I was fighting some predators on one of my marine characters, and after holding on to some gear, I had two of them on my tail. Now, I was pretty beat up, with three fractures, ruptured lungs, and just little health overall. Despite this, you helped old lonesome me, killing one in the process, and then bringing me back to life after the second one killed me - all the while roleplaying with the predator. Needless to say, this left a good impression of you - it’s rare to find marines help other marines when predators are fighting them, especially when it’s just one guy.

The second one was very negative, and was honestly quite the blow knowing you weren’t as cool as I thought you were.
I was FORECON survivor CO on LV522, and you were a FORECON survivor. After going with some other survivors to the reactor to grab armor, we broke off, and I incidentally met you. I pointed to you to follow, and you did, which was all well. Then, a singular drone came up to me. A singular one. Without hesitation, you ran ahead and left me for dead with the drone, all the while it was faster than I was off weeds. After this, with a stroke of luck, I escaped and ran to our meeting point. On the way there, I hear you on comms say ‘YES I GOT THE DIALYSIS MACHINE’, or something along those lines. Once there, I confronted you, and wanted to see what you had to say for yourself. Here’s where it gets worse. After telling you you shouldn’t abandon your CO over a singular drone, you double down and say I should’ve fought better, should’ve run, and that I should’ve had attachments for my Mateba. When I ignore those comments and tell you why it was such a dire thing, you escalate to LOOC snarky remarks and comments insulting me.

Once we get shipside, I ask you one final time about what you’ve learned today - and yet again, you double down along with a very half assed apology. You say I should’ve had attachments for my Mateba. At this point, I have you arrested under discretionary detainment. I check in multiple times to see if you had anything to say, and still, nothing. Eventually, you appeal to provost and it gets accepted (which was weird, as was the provost inspector). I want you to know that if you actually bothered to apologize, and weren’t lying about panicking, I wouldn’t have had you arrested shipside.
Round ID for this is 24719 if anyone cares enough.

As for your story, it’s got a lot of grammatical errors and your predator feels very generic. There is little to no interaction with prey.

To summarize, you:

  1. have the ability to roleplay, as demonstrated by the first incident, but still refuse to behave at times in roles that are expected to uphold a higher standard, as demonstrated by the second incident
  2. have the tendency to escalate and shittalk OOCly over IC actions. These qualities are not sought after when you’re an antagonistic character.
  3. have a below standard story.

-1. You can probably get the whitelist, but not anytime soon.

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I understand that I could’ve acted in another way that round. I won’t try to excuse me not helping, but I will bring up some of my own points from my perspective.

  1. FORECON CO’s do have access to heavy mateba ammo, which later you said you only had 6 shots left. I didn’t know up until that point.
  2. I was basically in flight or fight mode since I mostly play survivor. I would’ve planned to help you, but I instantly thought you either had a standard gun or would be able to run away.
  3. Do take into account I was playing at around 22 European time, which is pretty late.
  4. Your own words from my memory were when I was in the brig, “So Jake, how is it?” That doesn’t instantly translate into me asking for an apology.
  5. By my own RP standards, Jake’s character is what I suspect a lot of people call a “hard ass.” If you speak to him nicely, he will apologize and try to make it up.
    6.As I did say, one incident can’t decide if a player has a good grasp at RP you need more than some good and bad incidents to show and judge a player.
    I will admit the LOOC comments were too far, and I should’ve not said them. And im guessing you know that English wouldn’t be my first language.

The council has reviewed this application and decided to deny it.
The story is short and barely portrays anything, let alone your character and its personality.
Your performance whilst your application was up was not acceptable, lashing out in OOC over IC problems is a quality that does not belong to any pred applicant.

Reapply in a month if you wish.

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