poisonforwin - Yautja Application

Yautja Application - poisonforwin

What’s your BYOND key?

poisonforwin

What’s your Discord ID?

poison#2925

Do you have a regular character? If so - what’s their name?

Mia ‘Cassing’ Poisonous / MI-A

Yautja Info:

What’s the name of your Yautja?

Zuh’la

What clan are you joining?

Loxzil

If minor: Give your clan lore.

Yautja Character Story:

your story is not bad but not good either; could use more formatting & you should make it bigger(like at least three pages)
i’ve also never seen/noticed you in-game, so you’ll have to work on both of these
-1 from me

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i dont like the story, it feels like you wrote it in four minutes
i rarely see you around in game, what timezone are you in?
ive seen you around on discord, i guess
you should ask the council to review your application beforehand next time
-1

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UTC+3. The main problem is - 3 councils didn’t answer about my story, so i applied to find out mistakes/listen others opinions, etc. I don’t expect it to be accepted.

You spelt Yautja wrong in your story right off the bat. I don’t think you’re gonna get any support bud, I suggest you withdraw now and try again in thirty days.

Withdraw then shrugs.

Withdrawn, you can try again in 30 days.