your story is not bad but not good either; could use more formatting & you should make it bigger(like at least three pages)
i’ve also never seen/noticed you in-game, so you’ll have to work on both of these
-1 from me
i dont like the story, it feels like you wrote it in four minutes
i rarely see you around in game, what timezone are you in?
ive seen you around on discord, i guess
you should ask the council to review your application beforehand next time
-1
UTC+3. The main problem is - 3 councils didn’t answer about my story, so i applied to find out mistakes/listen others opinions, etc. I don’t expect it to be accepted.
You spelt Yautja wrong in your story right off the bat. I don’t think you’re gonna get any support bud, I suggest you withdraw now and try again in thirty days.