Hi Yeet_king and thanks for your interest in the Synthetic Whitelist.
I think there’s already quite a bit of feedback on what you need to work on, but just to reiterate:
You need to tell us WHICH characters you play, not which roles.
Your Synthetic’s personality should be something unique and something you are passionate about which will translate into gameplay well. Doing any job is no different from any other Synthetic, and being quiet is not really useful, so it would be a weak personality.
Your story should adequately explain your Synthetic and their personality in the universe.
Skill assessment: Go into more detail and explain what you like, what you are capable of, what you tend to do, etc. You can never elaborate too much on skill assessment.
Combat scenario: Unfortunately this is quite wrong. Also, we’re looking for scenarios - give examples of times you might have to do combat as a Synthetic.
Unfortunately I must deny this application, but you may apply in 30 days. Consider checking WL App Help for assistance or check with a councilor before you reapp. Best of luck! 