A group of Marines suddenly rush up and start shooting you. How do you respond?
With the help of invisibility, I will try to hide, but if they drag away my prey, I will try to take it away, at least I will use a stunning plasmaster
Another Yautja hunted and killed a target you had marked. What do you do?
I will demand an explanation from him and I will demand an apology, if there is none, I will challenge him to a duel of honor.
Do you have anything else you would like to include about your application?
I’m pretty bad at writing stories, so my yautja’s story will look bad, I’ve counted all the roles that aren’t shown in total time, and I get 200 hours. I really like this type of RP like yautja’s
I think I recognize your IC but I don’t think I can name any memorable experience, so can’t say if you can rp.
Something pred WLs will ask: Why did your story not in English, or the 1st part of it? So now even if your story in English I can’t even know since I’m not opening it to check. And you should’ve consulted with WL holders in discord prior writing your story for ideas (I heard they’re very lax on helping others with story). And seems like you didn’t ask any clan if they’re open for recruitment, and IIRC clanless means you’re near de-WL, not a state you can apply new.
That’s my two cents, can’t +1 but I’ll say good luck.
Yes, I was thinking of joining a clan, but because of the problem with writing in English, I thought it would be better for me to be without a clan so as not to get more problems for both the leader and me.
Since I’m not a WL holder, I can only give you advices: rewrite your story in English, as this is an English speaking community, then join discord and ask if anyone in #whitelist-app-help channel can give you feedback on it (most will). Play more but to refine your skills and RP style, not only to win.
And if you really don’t want to join any clan, you can write your own minor clan story (there’s no clanless status for pred, the closest is banished but they are punished from their clans for stuffs they did).
Yeah, i just first time working with Google docs and uh yes I delete this part with Russian. In two part with full translation to English It will remain
Yea ok, you should go to discord and ask for a proper storyline for your pred. About your story so far: a timid youngblood journey to a hunt, and get beaten up. It’s too short as 3/4 of the story are the other’s dialogues, not much about you (I can’t even figure out which of the youngblood is you).
Not a fan of people backseat-gaming in LOOC as a Youngblood. There’s really no need to make comments on how other people RP when you roll it. It irks me a lot.