Hi there!
I’ve been meaning to give my thoughts on your application for some time, but for once, I took my time to let the dust settle, so to speak.
I will organize this reply slightly differently to my usual setup, since I think you’re at the point where you’ve already received all the feedback you need to. You know your own strengths, and have discovered your biggest weaknesses in the last two weeks. How you choose to act on this feedback, is entirely up to you.
That said, I’d still like to provide some general advice, and of course offer my support of your application as a whole.
My thoughts on the written application
Your BE and Pardon answers, while not bulletproof, I believe set an excellent standard for aspiring CO applicants, looking for guidance. Your responses are skillfully written, an impressive length and level of depth, and are quite realistic as examples that may appear in a standard round. I can appreciate your legal philosophy, and would trust you to wield ML to the benefit of the operation, and your Marines.
As for your story, while it may bear (I hate that bare and bear mean two completely different things) similarities to a typical CM round, I was blown away with your writing abilities, and your use of scenery throughout your story. You successfully took a familiar premise for every commander, and turned into a pretty awesome story. Great work
I think the fact that nobody has been able to poke a major hole in your written application to date, says more than you might think.
As for my opinion of you as a person
I’ve known you just about as long as I’ve been playing CM at this point, all the way from the HM glory days, to the heights of Command, you remain one of the most skilled fighters and commanders I’ve come across to date.
Your positive community impact over that time, while discounted by some, has not gone unnoticed by many. You’re a genuine person, who knows what they’re doing, and is willing to help others learn the same.
You are broadly trusted, even more widely admired, and somehow friends with half the playerbase at once.
To loosely paraphrase something Nessie once said to me:
“At the end of the day, whether you are a Major, a LtCol or a General, people would follow you to a certain point. No one would follow someone they do not trust and do not know.”
I have yet to see a Commander more ready for their shot at the big leagues, and you have been for months. Keep your head, watch your temper, and lead the troops to victory, as I have no doubt you will.
Fly high Major Lopits! It’s about time you joined the ivory tower!!
+1!