NebulaHeart - Commanding Officer Application

Commanding Officer Application - NebulaHeart

What is your BYOND key?

NebulaHeart

What is your Discord ID?

Favorite.fari / NebulaHearts

What is your timezone in UTC?

UTC +3

Player Name You Use Most?

Ahmad Al Tabir

Ban Appeals, Whitelist and Staff Applications:

NebulaHeart - Sticky Ban Appeal / about sticky ban, approved by BlackDragon.

Have you been banned in the last 3 months?

Negative.

If so, why?

N/A

Command Knowledge:

How familiar are you with command positions?

Very well, im understanding command position as key communication centre between squads that allows effective usage of men power and brings the victory on whole operation, im understanding importance of every staff member on each positions (medical, req, MP, Auxiliary Combat Support, etc.) at the start of the operation im checking the staff members on their position, and making sure in their functionality, setting aSL if there no squad leader in a team, give access to req if there no CT, give access to valuable locations if there is need in this, for benefits of operation.

The main goal of the Command member is to give instructions to every member of Almayer. They must understand orders that have being given, Command annonce has to be used only to give valuable information or orders that have to be given, ONLY IN THAT WAY, the order itself must be short, informative, and simple. I cannot give an contradictory information or orders, otherwise the results will be devastating for the operation, and trust, between marines and command, that eventually may lead to the mutiny.

For the CIC itself im understanding every console, and conducting procedure for command members, i know about alerts, OBs, lockdowns, AA-cannon, evac, tacmap usage, SO and XO positions very well.

Every word and action of CO or XO, is matters, its have political and combat affection, that cannot be underrated, XO or CO is a man that represents the whole USS Almayer and all of the actions made by him, is under his responsibility, including actions made by staff of the Almayer such as crime and failure to follow procedure.

Community is awaiting high performance results form the Commanding Officer, CO is have special rights, but the responsibility is much higher than XO, or every single member of marine, stepping on this position im understanding that i have to be the Officer, that inspire the man for heroism, represents USCM interests, and an officer that every marine dreams to be, i have to be all at once.

Hours in XO:

47.7 hours

Hours in SL:

25.9 hours

Character Information:

Why did your character decide to become the CO of a ship?

The carrier path of every man that decided to use life for serving in military is always ends up in high status. Only stubborn and worthy will get promotions and respect not only in the high command eyes but in regular marine as well.

The USS Almayer the military ship, that upholds the power of platoon and capable of give a fair fight to any treats. Just another job for a man, but in much higher status with a privilege.
The Ahmad Al Tabir was the the Officer of USS Almayer for 3 years, which is a 9 years of military service, in total since he was an Second lieutenant, that served in marine corps.
My character sees an opportunity in military service as worthy job worth worthy men, he witnessed death and the beauty of military machine, he used to believe that, fighting against the enemy across all galaxy is the one of the best ways to spend life.

How did your character attain the position of CO?

The Ahmad Al Tabir was an example of an officer that using to believe that his own job is far more important that his own life, due an his distinguished service in marine corps, he believes that victory might be achieved only when the spirit itself is ready of an battle, that`s why he attained the the CO position by an commanding countless amount of operations against an enemy of all types, including in future the xenomorph threat itself.

Provide a short story of your CO.

Command Actions:

When do you believe it’s appropriate to pardon a prisoner?

Pardoning the prisoner is privilege with great responsibility within it, while the commanding office might pardon one or few people for operation benefits, or if their imprison is direct sabotage of operation stopping from performing essential duty of the ship.

However, the commanding officer before pardon should review the incident log from the military police and the defendant, to exclude any mistakes, unlike the appeal which is decision made by facts, the pardon is freeing the prisoner despite the crimes he made, and taking the results of past and future for yourself.

I cannot pardon Capital crime prisoner.

I will not pardon a prisoner if there is no absolute necessary in such action. (situations alike the life of other people counting on prisoner, or operation crucial benefits)

Give some examples of when you would or would not use pardon.

Example A

An combat technician insulting my persona during briefing, he is one of two engineers that on operation, getting DASO and Disorderly Conduct charges from military police, the marines telling me that this is the only combat technician that can assist in establishing communications, i might pardon a combat technician, if i didn’t cancel arrest before the drop. If there is next factors (One: he is only technical trained marine capable of establishing communication, if there is no FTL or SL, in his squad.) (Two: The second technician in other squads, is used to build the FOB, he is the only one technical trained marine capable in building defense) (Three he is shown his excuses to me and ready for cooperation)

Example B

Same Combat technician in same situation but with different crimes, but with Hooliganism and assault of other marine with fists. After review the story from both sides and the witnesses from the marines, i should check what happened in this situation, if i find the defendant guilty in his non-motivated actions, i will not pardon due an his discrimination against personality of other marines, if the life of the victim doesn’t depends on the situation, but in this case i might ask the offended person to take is off his charges from defendant.

When do you believe it’s appropriate to use a Battlefield Execution?

The battlefield Execution of BE in short is an permanent removal from the round by killing an marine, its an instrument like the pardon is used only in very little situations when it calls for it, When permanent killing of person is have more benefits right now than keeping his alive due to potential threat this person represents to my persona or my other marines, or other operations.

Meaning, the direct operation saboteur, the killer that we have no time to detain or his detain might cause even more troubles than his death right now and right here in my presence if he already didn’t gotten killed by his fellow marines, in this case i might finish the job by delivering 454. in skull.

Most of battlefield Executions should be likely to be done in battle on the ground or during hijack, otherwise i would like to use MP for his detain or even, if their action isn’t against my persona, in this case an attempt of murder matches with execution single approval from Commanding officer side.

Give some examples of when you would or would not use Battlefield Execution.

Example A

A marine that is causing a damage to others by throwing a nades into groups of others causing more damage to us than the enemy would, i would warn him (depending on the situation) for repeating an action that causing marines to die, will get punished by me in a form of BE, if he continues to kill, help getting cap, or injury a marines or me, he would be Battlefield executed for being a threat to me, marines, and operation.

Example B

A marine doing similar actions on to A example but the place changed to USS Almayer or FOB, due an safe spot he is good for procedure, and detain, allowing us for doing soo, if his crimes isn’t obvious to me i would like to await crime expertise if he will be found guilty for non-motivated murder, he will be Executed in normal way. If he was doing crime in my presente with intent to murder me, or anybody else, there will be no court.

Example C

The research got openly declined their proposal to make an greenos alien, after that i had doubt if they were listen to my order, i made an search in their laboratory and found an greenos infected alien that got into larva by report from military police, the Larva should be killed, the researchers will be detained by Discretionary Detainment charge do an possible infestation threat to the USS Almayer, in this case the person is not a direct threat itself, but their action might lead to more problems, the detainment and demotion, would be an option for this example.

The battlefield Execution is very rarely used instrument that is used in one single purpose, perma removal person from round by killing their character, it should be used carefully within a double check for every possible defence for an accused person. The permanent death to this person is better than continue of his life, only when i believe that this is true, i would perform Battlefield Execution.

During battle i will give only one warning to candidate for Battlefield Execution with an direct order to stop their actions in their way, direct attacks that deal massive damage to marines or an attempt of my assassination, or essential for operation person during battle, will be BE without warning.
During my duty on ship or FOB when its safe i will more likely to detain and return to Almayer with prisoner for his detainment.
If the person not a direct threat himself or his actions doesn’t deal direct short term damage to operation. He will be more likely to get Discretionary Detainment.

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Total playtimes at moment of application

In addition i want to tell that most of XO hours was played during july-august 2024, and then i was in over a year in University hard studying.

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Heya @Nebula_Hearts !

Personally, one of the largest skills a CO (or any leadership role, frankly) needs is communication. I consider this to be even more important than mechanical skill most times. This app doesn’t exactly give me strong confidence with a myriad of spelling and grammar mistakes. I highly suggest going over both the story and app with a fine-toothed comb for readability!

Perhaps it’s a matter of long form writing vs in-game, but unless there’s a drastic difference in-game I’m going to go with a -1 for the communication concerns alone.

Best of luck!

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I am an big fan of SCP stories and this why my story mostly is written in cold manner describing an actions and events during the my CO story, i found myself pleasure to describe surroundings instead adding 3 pages of heroic and and cool Hollywood typical quotes for main character. But i guess that’s what usually expected, With short briefing to situation before attacking the station i choose to ignore briefing part because i though the reader don’t want to review information he already knows. I choose to ignore communication between squads because they we’re already given information and tasks to handle, instead, overwatch gave vital information about situation.

My love to SCP stories hits me for loving cold written stories, which describes the situation at whole without person-to-person relations.

I admit your noting my grammar mistakes, i was writing it in two days rush, and was too confident for my job that i didn’t done too much editing in my text, English is not my native language, but funny enough everyone who i meet, thinks that i have excellent english speaking skills. Maybe i was self confident about my skills. That’s why i also play CM-SS13, for my english speaking communication practice. Giving me negative feedback is usefull for me, i would even read my story with pointing my grammar mistakes in my story.

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Hello, captain!

As I’m continuing my trend of leaving early feedback on these apps I’ll be doing the same here for you.

Honestly when I looked over this application I wasn’t at all impressed. From your story leaving a strange timeline, involving some elements that we do not feel fit the lore of the setting to the self-admittedly rushed nature of your answers. I feel the written portion of your application is heavily letting you down.

And honestly? That’s a shame because ingame I am genuinely impressed. After speaking with another councilor regarding your conduct in round they agreed. I think you have genuine potential, and showed to me ability to RP, communicate clearly both shipside and when deployed. Your announcements are formatted well, your decisions in cic are sensible. There are XO players with double if not triple your playtime who are considerably less competent than you have demonstrated.

But you’re let down by two things. One, obviously as mentioned above I feel your written app is really rushed.

Two, I think your spelling/grammar needs some work, everyone typos every so often and I’m aware english is your second language but you need to take it slower and practice a little more.


I am rooting for you, genuinely but I would recommend withdrawing this application, rewriting it and applying with the new application. If you do that and submit an application you’ve put more care into while keeping up the same (if not better) standards ingame as I’ve seen so far you will have my support without doubt.

Wishing you luck, whatever you decide to do, captain.

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I remember great interactions you back in the day. @itsmarmite is giving great advice and I echo what he has said. I wish you luck!

Take what marmite says to heart; you’ve been away for a batrillion zillion years but when you got back in the saddle as XO after posting this, you were so extremely competent and such a stand-out even in your first round back. Workshop with people on the WL; only they can know what will or will not pass muster for the council and even though there were some "revise and resubmit"s given here, as already stated: it’s only because they want you to represent your skills and abilities to your fullest.

You have everything I’d ask for from a CO as just a normie player, though. It feels like you also grew a bit OOC since I last saw you around :slight_smile: All moving in a very positive direction. I think this is not a matter of “if”, but “when”. Be fearless in trying again!

So very nice to have you back!!!

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Howdy, Nebula.

Your application needs pretty serious work. I don’t even judge grammar and spelling errors too harshly, as in-game, you’re pretty okay. (Hell, you’re probably better than some of our standing COs.)

While I have told my fellow councilors that I have been pleasantly surprised by you, I firmly believe in being straightforward and honest here.

You should seriously consider withdrawing this application and trying again next month after getting a friend or two to proofread and help you with your story. It is your weakest link and frankly at what you’ve shown so far is the only thing that will damn you.

If you don’t go that route, I would suggest remaining on your A-GAME as the odds are going to be heavily stacked against you. I think you have shown significant merit, but the level to which this app is lacking is going to turn off a lot of people.

Anyways, that’s my two cents.

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Dammit, wait i actually expected this in some kind.

I see you unpleased with my application but i see that council and gamers happy with my first performance, hard to not see it when this fact literally spoken to your face. I hope to continue in such way as you do want to see.

I didn’t used to share my work with others thinking it might lead to co-working on this app with two or more people, being afraid of denying or unnecessary advertisement, which again leading to deny.

I see two out of five current councillors are not against, or for it, i have success and failure mixed in this application, i assume council are positive with my in-game performance, at the moment.

But can i ask for one kindness, might i have a senator free advice on this application? im not sure what to actually to do, continue my performance with current application or retry after a month of waiting.

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Well cards on the table.

You are correct in your assumption on that; while this app is somewhat regarded as a bit of a mess, a couple of us are very pleased with how you perform in-game. We’ve noted that you’ve gone out of your way on a couple of occasions to maintain consistency with operations, and I appreciate that. At least in interacting with you on my toaster and one of my hidden alts, you’ve been pretty consistent in character.

Now, that being said. What should you do? You have two options.

A. We let the app run its course, and it comes to a vote. You’ll need the majority of the council to vote yes. Now, you’ve been good, so this strictly isn’t entirely impossible, it’s just improbable. If it fails, you must wait 30 days, take the advice to heart, and try again.

B. Withdraw your applicant and start the 30-day timer early, and use the time to improve your next application and story to the point that it isn’t headache-inducing to read.

I’d suggest B because if you approached this with a stronger application, you’d likely be able to get in with little to no problems.

Anyways, that’s my two cents and thought process. Do as you will.

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Aces, thats already making four of your cents here.

After some sleeping i decided to withdraw this WL application, re-do it with your advice to get help from others majors.

During this month i will occasionally show myself and hope this will affect to my next application.

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The application is withdrawn at the applicant’s request.

You may reapply within 30 days, on July 31, 2025.

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