Hi NotLiquidus, thanks for your interest in the Synthetic Whitelist.
There’s already some feedback but to give you the gist:
- Personality: We would recommend you rework this because quite a bit can be attributed to other Synthetics, and we feel that in general your listed attributes aren’t really unique or impactful in a significant fashion. A rework from the ground up would be a good idea - and you should pick something related to one of your hobbies or passions. Doing so will make it easier for you to integrate it into your gameplay while being fun.
- Story: Your story was a good effort but I think it exemplified that the dialogue for your Synthetic would be too wordy and too ‘fluffy’ to be integrated into normal gameplay. Less is more, so long as the content is good. So again this ties back into reworking your personality.
- Experience: Decent answers, however we felt based on observations that your medical gameplay was not up to par. I highly recommend you spend more time getting comfortable in triage - Corpsman is the best way to go. Make sure you scan patients and double check before administering medicine.
We wished to see you in more support roles more often, and while you are competent in other areas we think that your medical expertise could be improved quite a bit more! The medical concerns combined with lack of vouches and the personality have unfortunately meant that this will be denied - but you can reapply in 30 days. Please take the feedback and refine your app, and feel free to ask for more advice in WL App help or by councilors. Best of luck! 