bwo_incognito - Synthetic Application

[Birdtalon]

Your story is one paragraph long. Some synthetic applications have pages and pages of story and background with dialogue and situations where people can get to know who your synthetic is. How can people get to know Shard in one paragraph?

Compare how much you’ve written in your application compared to the most recent accepted applications.

TheGamer01 - Synthetic Application

Synthetic Application - TheGamer01 What is your BYOND key? TheGamer01 What is your Discord ID? Bibby01 Do you usually play a specific character? If so, who? Thomas Neumann, Solomon Highlands What whitelist applications have you previously completed? TheGamer01 - Commanding Officer Application | Accepted Synthetic Info: Name of the Synth Character you wish to play: Benjamin What is your Synthetic’s Personality? The Benjamin line of synthetics was originally built to assist on early-stage col…

CampinKiller - Synthetic Application

Synthetic Application - CampinKiller What is your BYOND key? CampinKiller What is your Discord ID? CampinKiller Do you usually play a specific character? If so, who? Victoria A.W. Pedersen, Kara Walker What whitelist applications have you previously completed? None Synthetic Info: Name of the Synth Character you wish to play: Marie What is your Synthetic’s Personality? Marie’s personality is based in the model’s roots as a service-oriented model. Synthetics in front facing positions such as…

This first story alone is about 3500 words more than yours is. The second one is 2300 words more than yours. Not to mention their application answers are longer and more comprehensive.

That’s what I mean when I say low effort.